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Spending the day of hearts with you
Is what i hoped, waited and wanted to do
To have you close on this special moment
I'll have you in the past, the future, especially the present.

Gave you all that you would ever need
But fate did have it's plans indeed
You had to leave...I let you go
I did that because i cared for you so.

Had been months after you left
Into my heart you still have a cleft
You are still in it's beat
A faint hope, an impossible feat.

Spending the day of hearts with you
Is what i hoped, waited and wanted to do
But since you're with your beloved one
I sit here alone...My new life has begun.
©2005-2009 ~highcharity
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....Something i wrote a while back =P

Enjoy!~:heart:

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:iconlavetite:
wow... ganda... T___T
experience? if it was then with whom XD hahaha la lng... sobrang feel yung poem XD

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"Even if I cry, remember that I will smile again"

-いや
:iconhighcharity:
Heheh...Thanks. ^^

Ala lang, friend lang un :D

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:iconkawaii-ash:
Awww... that's so sad. It's beautiful, but sad. :hug:

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~Not everyone can be happy at the same time, be everyone can at least be happy sometimes.~

I am Garnet Til Alexandros XVII in DA's Final Fantasy Crew
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Haay... ang daming mali mali... typographical errors almost unavoidable yun kaya exception yun... Yung ibang lines medyo kakaiba yung meter at nagkakaroon ng kawalan ng balanse sa rhythm.... Lalo na ang line 4 na masmahaba sa average na haba... kung ito ay babawasan, malulunasan... tsaka line 11 na medyo masmaikli... dagdagan... Well... kung ayaw mong baguhin, fine... Di ko naman sinasabing baguhin mo...

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I have a different reality. No one could completely understand me. Not even myself...

My Web-"novels":
[link] Tears and Pandemonium
[link] Legacy of Arclune
:iconhighcharity:
I jsut felt like writing noh, di naman talaga ak poet, syempre naman ala ak pake sa format nun kahit ngaun ayoko palitan kasi tinatamad ak :D

Thanks nalang for pointing it out! Master k talaga ah? :worship:

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:heart: <3 little girls with guns. 8D :heart:

Click on it==>[link] come on, u know u want to :nod:
:iconhighcharity:
Haha...thanks :thanks: ^^

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:heart: <3 little girls with guns. 8D :heart:

Click on it==>[link] come on, u know u want to :nod:
:iconpsycho-stress:
I'm no master...

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I have a different reality. No one could completely understand me. Not even myself...

My Web-"novels":
[link] Tears and Pandemonium
[link] Legacy of Arclune
:iconhighcharity:
Weeeh ;P no need to get humble on me, totoo naman eh! :D

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:heart: <3 little girls with guns. 8D :heart:

Click on it==>[link] come on, u know u want to :nod:
:iconseika:
omg D: that was like </3 ...
;_; it was so pretty and sad...

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:iconhighcharity:
Don't you start crying now! pati ak napapaiyak na din TwT

Heheh...Thanks :hug: ^^ I think i have a better chance at becoming a poet than an artist...bwahaha :evillaugh:

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:heart: <3 little girls with guns. 8D :heart:

Click on it==>[link] come on, u know u want to :nod:

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